tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1735446301837589358.post799137035263151721..comments2023-11-03T09:04:26.994-04:00Comments on A Thing for Words: Perfect AngelJoseph Heschhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13217169295029029233noreply@blogger.comBlogger23125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1735446301837589358.post-79912666154865052802011-11-10T11:19:51.893-05:002011-11-10T11:19:51.893-05:00wow, Joe. just.... wow. what a story. love, love t...wow, Joe. just.... wow. what a story. love, love the the scar as a tear she decided to "uncry." wow.joannahttp://the-tenth-muse.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1735446301837589358.post-44559644163177136942011-11-09T08:56:54.156-05:002011-11-09T08:56:54.156-05:00sigh...The track of a tear she decided
to uncry, p...sigh...The track of a tear she decided<br />to uncry, perhaps...Patriciahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00991524097486901864noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1735446301837589358.post-69477627678055736092011-11-09T01:49:15.650-05:002011-11-09T01:49:15.650-05:00You've approached this sadness so tenderly. Lo...You've approached this sadness so tenderly. Lovely piece.Joanne Young Elliotthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14431836725661024756noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1735446301837589358.post-38246475601991907092011-11-09T01:11:49.743-05:002011-11-09T01:11:49.743-05:00..we are living in an up-side-down world.. everyth.....we are living in an up-side-down world.. everything goes in separate ways.. and none is fair.. likable piece, indeed.<br /><br />Good day!<br /><br />~Kelvinkelvin s.m.https://www.blogger.com/profile/08116213800655914273noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1735446301837589358.post-36611299940774765382011-11-08T23:36:31.901-05:002011-11-08T23:36:31.901-05:00Wow, it's hard to think about the reality of t...Wow, it's hard to think about the reality of this scenario, but by inviting us into her world and taking us through the spiraling journey with her you've managed to show how one can easily become a victim of his/her circumstances. So many are spoiled by the harshness of this world.emmahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08514349657575238498noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1735446301837589358.post-31966586824241095202011-11-08T22:45:39.740-05:002011-11-08T22:45:39.740-05:00Intense write-- compression serves your well as do...Intense write-- compression serves your well as does the deceptive ease of your style-- evocative. Now I'm blue...xxxxjJenne' R. Andrews https://www.blogger.com/profile/15744946229300234443noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1735446301837589358.post-58262552912306511882011-11-08T22:43:36.570-05:002011-11-08T22:43:36.570-05:00Powerful... and such a sad situation.Powerful... and such a sad situation.Laurie Kolphttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07494759781947881343noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1735446301837589358.post-38976444480706798402011-11-08T22:25:51.733-05:002011-11-08T22:25:51.733-05:00Hi Joseph
What a poignant and perfect picture you...Hi Joseph<br /><br />What a poignant and perfect picture you have portrayed in your words... Thanks for sharing...<br /><br />Shashi<br />ॐ नमः शिवाय <br />Om Namah Shivaya<br />http://shadowdancingwithmind.blogspot.com/2011/11/whispers-tears-in-rain.htmlShashidhar Sharmahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10752054354309206121noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1735446301837589358.post-31607322822567827192011-11-08T20:03:30.676-05:002011-11-08T20:03:30.676-05:00I love how you describe and use the scar to expand...I love how you describe and use the scar to expand her story and character. Sad but well-written.Yousei Himehttp://tasmith1122.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1735446301837589358.post-12300423001954332282011-11-08T17:40:21.731-05:002011-11-08T17:40:21.731-05:00Excellent piece Joe. The reality and psychology m...Excellent piece Joe. The reality and psychology merge, which you harness about as well as one could. Really enjoyed the piece, thanksAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05885047796180529498noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1735446301837589358.post-73657524463788715052011-11-08T17:12:26.119-05:002011-11-08T17:12:26.119-05:00Think everyone has already stole all my words..hah...Think everyone has already stole all my words..haha....harsh indeed, so true as well, sadly.Pat Hatthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07745293224202430152noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1735446301837589358.post-443627527731807982011-11-08T16:49:45.029-05:002011-11-08T16:49:45.029-05:00Wow. What a poem. That last line just delivers lik...Wow. What a poem. That last line just delivers like a punch to the stomach. Thanks for the write.Uneven Stephenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14081631496158407509noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1735446301837589358.post-63263554357291869252011-11-08T16:30:39.943-05:002011-11-08T16:30:39.943-05:00wow... harsh, beautiful, sad... the raw strength t...wow... harsh, beautiful, sad... the raw strength to carry on... a whole medley of emotion... beautifulShelley Lundquisthttp://letmemoveyou.me/category/poetrynoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1735446301837589358.post-23359798767100893432011-11-08T16:22:06.501-05:002011-11-08T16:22:06.501-05:00"The track of a tear she decided
to uncry, pe..."The track of a tear she decided<br />to uncry, perhaps."<br />Startlingly beautiful and tragic all at the same time!<br />A compelling and compassionate poem.somewhereamelodyhttp://somewhereamelody.blogspot.com//2011/11/from-mountain-to-favela.html%23!/2011/11/from-mountain-to-favela.html#!/2011/11/from-mountain-to-favela.htmlnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1735446301837589358.post-86797329077794557432011-11-08T16:14:48.320-05:002011-11-08T16:14:48.320-05:00is it bad that i found humor in this? i loved it!is it bad that i found humor in this? i loved it!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1735446301837589358.post-73927982005989182292011-11-08T16:11:09.780-05:002011-11-08T16:11:09.780-05:00dang joe...think this is my new fav by you...aweso...dang joe...think this is my new fav by you...awesome write and what a f..mad worldClaudiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03011763027311966186noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1735446301837589358.post-36073481776057992622011-11-08T15:46:56.795-05:002011-11-08T15:46:56.795-05:00That was incredibly lonesome. I think you have bee...That was incredibly lonesome. I think you have been hanging out with the BorgPoet!<br /><br />Wonderfully poignant Joe.theborgpoethttp://theborgpoet.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1735446301837589358.post-19767839648734856542011-11-08T15:12:25.539-05:002011-11-08T15:12:25.539-05:00I loved these lines, "The track of a tear she...I loved these lines, "The track of a tear she decided<br />to uncry, perhaps." Can't help but wonder at the inspiration for this one.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1735446301837589358.post-86674113424947814422011-11-08T10:25:57.337-05:002011-11-08T10:25:57.337-05:00Joe...this is maddening! So sad, so desperate, so ...Joe...this is maddening! So sad, so desperate, so perfect. What a write!Tashtoohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15847190224960829574noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1735446301837589358.post-79864661240109669002011-11-07T18:13:53.707-05:002011-11-07T18:13:53.707-05:00how sad for the perfect angel ..lovely story you s...how sad for the perfect angel ..lovely story you shared here ~Scarlethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03330793338813508704noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1735446301837589358.post-40466040296070156472011-11-07T15:22:57.866-05:002011-11-07T15:22:57.866-05:00good god...what a hard life and you know you got t...good god...what a hard life and you know you got to wonder what it is that keeps them...is it really love or dependence and feeling unworthy of another...great pen sir...Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1735446301837589358.post-21197383771375706752011-11-07T14:39:00.748-05:002011-11-07T14:39:00.748-05:00Thoughtful, sad, and such a harsh truth to the wor...Thoughtful, sad, and such a harsh truth to the world we live in.Ginny Brannanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15298060016652737538noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1735446301837589358.post-13714518540258059932011-11-07T10:09:03.323-05:002011-11-07T10:09:03.323-05:00Ugly topic, beautifully expressed. You do
almost g...Ugly topic, beautifully expressed. You do<br />almost give her wings...Heather Grace Stewarthttp://heathergracestewart.comnoreply@blogger.com